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Paper man

 

Paper Man

Credit: Marie Cardoua

One windy night a girl named Emma went outside to take her night walk to have some fresh air. So when she went outside she was walking but then while she was walking she stopped because she saw a paper man. The paper on the paper man is floating away from the wind, the girl Emma Said to herself. Then she had an idea and she said that maybe she didn’t need to do anything because the wind will make the paper man float away, said Emma. So she waited and waited but the paper man was still walking and wasn’t gone yet so Emma kept on waiting. A few hours later the paper man was still alive but then a storm came and the trees were leaning sideways but when the storm stopped the paper man was still there and just walking peacefully. The girl realised that the wind was coming back again but then this time Emma also was helping the wind by blowing out air from her mouth and it worked. Finally Emma said The paper man is gone and Emma kept on walking to get fresh air when the wind stopped. Then the wind stopped so Emma went back to her walk. She also said what a weird day today Emma said in her mind while she was walking back to her house after her walk.

Queens birthday

Task Description:I wrote about the queens birthday it was fun but that fun beacause it was kinda hard but it was fun.

IN the second week of june each year we have a special holiday.This holiday is called the queens birthday all though it isan’t the real birthday of the queen Elizabith the 2nd. She was in fact born on the 20 1st of Aiprl 1926 making her 96 years old this year.So why do a holiday of the Queens birthday.A long time ago in 1901 all of them about the Queens great grand father deciodie the weather in Novmber the time of his real birthday was to wet to hold a proper celebration. So he deacioded to cabean with the troping the coloers. The troping the coloers been used to mark the birthdays of British monart over two hundred 60 years. Each year thousands of soldiers and hundreds of horeses march in a huge prade.This years Queens birthday is very speical. This year we celebrate her majesty Queen Elizabeth the 2nd becoming the first britisish monarch to celebrate Platinum Jubilee after seventeen years 70 years on the throne.

Lollipop Trees Dictation

Task Descrioption: I had write a dictation called lollipop trees. It was super fun and easy to do.

One beautiful sunny morning, Mrs. Moala saw a really strange sight when she opened her eyes.When she pulled open the classroom curtains, her eyes grew large.The sky was purple and the trees were lollipops.’What is going on?” She wondered.”I better put on my new glasses!” Mrs. Moala reached over and put on her new glasses she got after her eye checked. When she opened the classroom door, she turned into the cool breeze. She smiled.To her right she saw a friendly face. Ms Scanlan was smiling and coming through the door holding her backpack. “Did you see the lollipop trees?” Mrs. Moala said. “Yea!” Ms Scanlan said.”Aren’t they great!”